Blouse too risque?

[claireli.livejournal.com]

So, I sketched up a new design that I'm working on currently. The skirt is meant to be lolita, but is the blouse too un-traditional? Can I pair the skirt with the blouse in my design, and still have the gothic coordinate overall be lolita?

I took the inspiration of the halter blouse from Namie Amuro. Of course, I figured if I throw a cardigan over it - then it won't be breaking any lolita rules.

Opinions? 






Blouse? Can still be lolita or not? And while we are at it, what do you think of the pillbox hat? I'm worried that it falls out of lolita tradition, and wouldn't constitute as the style anymore.

Thank you EGL!
-Claire